Wednesday, September 5, 2012

My first post!

This is my first post for my English class, Writing for the World.

1 comment:

  1. I think that it was good that you stated your opinion right away so that the reader would know what your thoughts were throughout the review. It was a nice change to see that someone wasn't afraid to say that they didn't like the show because most people would usually say that they like it even if they didn't. You gave a good recap and I was able to follow along pretty easily so that was good. Also, the flow of the article was very smooth so it was really easily to follow. You did a good job with grammar, opinions, and tone and I think it was a great review.

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